Performance Review Writer for Consulting Firms

Improve feedback: you need to increase your sales numbers or you might lose your job

Create development recommendations for employee who should improve client engagement skills

An employee needs to work on their writing skills, what's the best way to convey this message?

And employee is great at networking with potential clients, but it never follows up to close deals, how would you phrase it?

Improve: Can you stop being late for every meeting?